even the golden memories go sour
I love this.. though I think I would have liked "even the golden memories grow sour" instead of "go sour".. but that's just me.
I saw this only having one line and thought, "This can't be good." But then i read it and i was quite impressed by how strong you made this one line poem. Very nice!
remembering the life you once had hurts...... because you know it's sadly dead. ;w;
I couldn't agree more.
remembering fucking sucks
I love it when poets write things that may be considered not worthwhile. This is only a single line but it carries so much weight. Such fantastic words!
yeah...remembering can suck, good job conveying that.