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even the golden memories go sour
remembering hurts 
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Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Professional General Artist
I love this.. though I think I would have liked "even the golden memories grow sour" instead of "go sour".. but that's just me.
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susano-hime Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
I saw this only having one line and thought, "This can't be good." But then i read it and i was quite impressed by how strong you made this one line poem. Very nice!
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annafuru Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
remembering the life you once had hurts...... because you know it's sadly dead. ;w;
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butter-holiday Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
I couldn't agree more.
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Ashbrie13 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Student General Artist
remembering fucking sucks 
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soulspoken Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Professional Writer
I love it when poets write things that may be considered not worthwhile. This is only a single line but it carries so much weight. Such fantastic words!
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ArcNovaXIII Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yeah...remembering can suck, good job conveying that.
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