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The poison in my blood
is the best high i can have.
the lures in my heart
they rip my soul in half.

I go numb in your presence
words dead in the air.
some days you're hard to escape
some days i can only stare.

The words I want to say
are murdered in the night.
All i can do is scream them to death;
I'm such a joke; such a mess; such a fright.

I can only hold you in memories,
this love has me impailed.
My scared lips can still smile . . .
But my soul is torn from needles and nails.
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this may turn into a song, not sure about the notes or the tune, but i liked the title. it's the first half of a forbidden love between a demon and angel (humans, of course, but they have demon and angel characteristics)
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Mood: Eager ~sumersela Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i have a feeling i'm gonna enjoy your new poem all to well :D
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:iconwizardhowl10001:
haha, you've just raised the pressure
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~sumersela Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
that's a good thing right? :D
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~sumersela Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
plenty of things to go further :D what happens after there together

what kind of obstacles could be waiting for them

some liar, a promise, name it, you can figure out something ^^

it's all what you want it to be when you just write it down ^^

and shure no problem
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:iconwizardhowl10001:
ill try and make a poem with both of their ideas together, and such marvelous questions you have given me to answer!!! :D I'll try it out sometime, hopefully all goes well, and we come to a conclusion
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Mood: Joy ~sumersela Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
well, if you need some inspiration, i'm more of a monster themed writer but i'd be happy to help you get some answers or inspiration ^^ good luck with your new poem and make shure i'll get to read it :D
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:iconwizardhowl10001:
thanks! i'll start tonight, see where i end up. hope you like it :D
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Mood: Joy ~sumersela Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i like your way of thinking :D i have a song about a love that won't be

chemical wedding it's called "wich actually is a forbidden love between demon and angel"

i think you'll like it ^^
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:iconwizardhowl10001:
i love forbidden loves. but the problem when writting about them is where to go after they're together. and i'll check it out, thanks :D
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