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Though you'll try
With your broken mind
To keep your feelings
Locked inside

And though you'll fall
Into the snow
With their guns
As a final blow

It's not over.
Don't fool yourself.
Run to heaven;
Slip to hell.

It's not over.
Till say it is.
And now that you finally see
Take a good look at me.

Do I burn?
Do I chill?
A kiss of poison
For the kill.

Look at me
Through the smoke
I love you, you know.

Does it hurt?
Don't make it worse.
I'm hear for you
I'm not your hearse.
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I just got done reading the book thief, and it pulled tears from me I didn't even knew I had. So, of course I had to write something about it
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*angelenroute Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I feel like it could be improved slightly with just a tiny touch here and there, but I'm not sure what right now. I'm commenting though because as it is, it's a really good poem, and you should be very happy with it. Well done!
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:iconwizardhowl10001:
Ah, thank you! I never really look over my stuff before I
upload it, which I probably should, but I'll take a look and
fix it up.
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~candygirl101010 Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i reeeeeeeelllllly like it good job ma man... er chik... err person?
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~candygirl101010 Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha soz
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~sumersela Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
nice one :)
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