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I know the end to every story.
Each surprise is kinda boring.
There's not a secret left alive,
Not tantilizing enough to thrive.

This storyline is pointless,
Every hero is too honest,
Every villain is too dark.
Why not make it over?

A secret would be a good place to start.

A lost love, a foreign fight.
A battle with time to keep from losing your mind.
A map with blank corners, etched upon your heart.

Lying out under the stars,talking in code.
The way friends always do, as the secret
Becomes their life, a way to escape
Thus the squares begin to shape.

Each pulse is clicking, full of life
Both souls are new, shiny and bright.

The blessings of the universe
Take away the wicked curse.

And now the secret begins to burn.
:iconwizardhowl10001:
I wated to write something NOT dark and scary for once.
I actually got this idea from watching Terminator, so....i don't know how that works....
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~Cupcake-Stories Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful, great job! ^^
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~Cupcake-Stories Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your very welcome. :)
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Mood: Joy ~sumersela Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i'd laugh if at the bottom said "i'll be back" :D

love your poem ^^
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:iconwizardhowl10001:
Hahaha, that would have been a great twist.
Thanks :D
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~sumersela Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome ^^
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~Octavias101 Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
I featured your work in a journal from my group #Words-of-Life. [link] I also would like to invite you to join our group if you so wish to, as your work is very interesting and comprehensible.
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:iconwizardhowl10001:
Thank you very much. I'd love to join.
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~allivegotarerainbows Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
I agree with this poem about the hero and villain. Other than that, this poem is interesting.
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:iconwizardhowl10001:
Yeah--i believe not every villain wants world domination,
or every hero is perfect. It makes the story dull and
rather boring.
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