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last night
i read the
obituaries
and when i saw
your name wasn't dead
decaying or rusting
rotting in a forest
mingling with a pile of
ashes, i realized
you really could
live without me
You said you couldn't live without me
So why aren't you dead yet
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AzriellaVeRaon Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Nice, short, and gets the point across.  I like it.
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ilyilaice Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
angry pretty. yep. i like this.
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014   Writer
This is very pretty.
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Professional Writer
I think a part of us dies everytime love is lost. This poem is efficacious in its delivery. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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yellowyellowmustard Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
you have a chance to live too, dont waste it.
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sumersela Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
some people can die inside

others are just good liars

like the poem ^^
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SunflowerGirlGraphic Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student General Artist
I agree.  I know I died inside a year ago.  I'm finally getting to the point that I'm really living again.
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