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i could've been anchored away
beneath the frost and floe
comatose in the river mud.
i would've been mortified
ice crushing my lungs into sushi
nothing but the taste of dirt
curling over my tongue.
i should've considered
that i wouldn't have
spoken any last words
only bubbles would slip through
my teeth.  
I was sitting under the bridge i nearly jumped off, today 
and i wrote this 
Please remember that you aren't alone 
and you don't have to end your life before you live it
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KyaniteArcher Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Grats on the well-deserved DLD. :)
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is a wonderful perspective, and the poem is very beautiful. :heart:
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ReiReiSerenade Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Congrats on the DLD! It is well deserved! :heart: This piece is beautifully written and very original! :clap:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here. Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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hadasaugh Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Professional General Artist
I think you understand we are happy to hear that you did not jump, so the world can continue to hear and read and see what you have to tell.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014

I came close to it a lot, this past summer

And a few more times in the beginning of winter, but with different tools


But I think I've been almost two weeks clean


So


Improvement


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hadasaugh Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Professional General Artist

Great!  Keep improving.  Eventually, you'll see why and that is what you need to be searching for, not looking back.

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xxBoneless Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
Thanks
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Professional Writer
A subject close to my heart. The poem is telling, expressive and relatable. Somehow you writing this underneath a bridge reminded me of Kurt Cobain...

Regards,
John.
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