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You're so faraway.
You never breathe or say a thing.

You're a monster.
Torn to shreds without a word.

I'm a ghost.
Lost when you needed me the most.

I don't care.
You've let me down.

You're the cruel one.
Goodbye to you and all you've done.
This is what saying goodbye feels like, for me 
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candygirl101010 Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i reely like this 2 dood ur a great poet!!!!
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camera-junkie Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is lovely. I bet it would sound great if it was set to music, and if it was a tad bit longer.

But I can relate. Beautiful work, darling.
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:iconwizardhowl10001:
Thanks :D I didn't want it to trail on forever,
but yes, I usually right longer stuff
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camera-junkie Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Well, this is good. Keep it up. Maybe you'll be a songwriter one day.
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:iconwizardhowl10001:
I all ready write for fun :D So yes, maybe
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camera-junkie Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Good luck to you!
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