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i left your sorry ass
to decay in the dust
because my arms hurt
from carting around
all the glue it took
to fix you.  
Sometimes I really hate people 
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Nice poem, but i'm at odds with it. 
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
How so? 
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Well, I don't know the entire situation of the poem, but I could find ways to relate to it. I mean, if I had to keep on fixing someone over and over again, I don't think i'd leave them because a healing process of any sort takes years. I think there would be times i'd get annoyed of them, but I wouldn't leave them. 
It's happened to me before too, but I wanted to abandon this person so badly because everything I said meant nothing_but, i didn't give up. I just kept helping, and eventually, they got better. 

But that's just me. 
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
It's true, it takes time..

But the person this is about pretty much made me feel worse than i already did.  They were self destructive and mentally unstable, and after trying time and time again, I realized i really had nothing else to offer them.  They needed help far beyond my ability.

But I get where you're coming from
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Professional Writer
Well this poem has a backbone! Good writing...

Regards,
John.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Thank you ^-^
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Professional Writer
;)
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KittySib Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Shot and to the point! :D
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Thank you c:
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Short and bitter. Perfect poem for the next dwarf king.
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