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i left your sorry ass
to decay in the dust
because my arms hurt
from carting around
all the glue it took
to fix you.  
Sometimes I really hate people 
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Nice poem, but i'm at odds with it. 
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
How so? 
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Well, I don't know the entire situation of the poem, but I could find ways to relate to it. I mean, if I had to keep on fixing someone over and over again, I don't think i'd leave them because a healing process of any sort takes years. I think there would be times i'd get annoyed of them, but I wouldn't leave them. 
It's happened to me before too, but I wanted to abandon this person so badly because everything I said meant nothing_but, i didn't give up. I just kept helping, and eventually, they got better. 

But that's just me. 
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
It's true, it takes time..

But the person this is about pretty much made me feel worse than i already did.  They were self destructive and mentally unstable, and after trying time and time again, I realized i really had nothing else to offer them.  They needed help far beyond my ability.

But I get where you're coming from
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014   Writer
Well this poem has a backbone! Good writing...

Regards,
John.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Thank you ^-^
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014   Writer
;)
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KittySib Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Shot and to the point! :D
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Thank you c:
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Short and bitter. Perfect poem for the next dwarf king.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Thank you 
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome. :)
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Ziesy Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This captures the spirit of tumultuous relationships really well. The fact that it's short and to the point also works well since it's a sort of burst of anger. Very nice poem.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Thank you 
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