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i found a mangled body
and tried to fix it.
but i got too close
and ended up cutting myself
on the jagged remains.

the bleeding hasn't stopped.
Getting close to someone will always hurt no matter what 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree, beautiful piece.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Thanks c: 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)
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slycooperfan Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Writer
This is a beautiful piece that I think some of us can relate to :) Good job on the extended metaphor.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Thank you :aww:
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Professional Writer
I can appreciate and relate with the meaning - but I have to disagree. Getting close to someone doesn't always result in despair or anguish. Only when we feel pain do we appreciate love. Those old scars of lost love become who we are - a person that will eventually be loved and understood for all our mistakes and inadequacies. Having said that - this poem is still incredible. Nicely done. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
You're right; every experience is different
And thanks :aww:
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Professional Writer
No problem. Thankyou for listening.
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AsakoBunny Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sometimes even the tiniest thing you do to people can make a big impact. I wish people would learn that.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Same here.  You can't fix everything but it's human nature to want someone to stop hurting 
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