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fate is the slut
we take out for
dinner in the Las
Vegas of life.
She fucks us and
then leaves us in
a dusty hotel
room, with only our
empty pockets and
the sun bleaching
our eyes dry
Sometimes I really hate that bitch 
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myriadwhitedarkness Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome poem. Great use of symbolism. 
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014

Thanks~:heart:

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StarlightComet Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ha, I liked this :clap:
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014

Thanks~:heart:

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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Professional Writer
Very accomplished. I love the mature language - it injects some realism. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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maximilianobianco Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Photographer
That's quite the way with words you have there...you could always take fate out for coffee or tea, it doesn't have to be a full blown dinner.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
Indeed

Tho not everyone can flirt without getting hooked 

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PoeticEnd Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is pretty good.
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WizardHowl10001 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
Thanks~:heart:
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TheLunaticIsInMyHead Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this :happybounce: 

Also, question. Do you like/ read Alan Ginsberg? I feel like you'd be into his poetry(just a guess)
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